4 years 6 months ago - 4 years 6 months ago#3358by allaykat
Hello I believe we are moving now on dn and have something to show If you have a moment to peruse the following site would be appreciated
quebec2014.iengravedit.net (Edited by Brenden)
Any comments appreciated even positive ones!!
Quite often I feel there is a elephant in the room and I can't see it , and in this case I fell like I missed something with this site I was trying to keep it clean and simple for the process to really flow.
Last Edit: 4 years 6 months ago by brenden. Reason: Edited the site URL
First impression is nice and clean. I like the description of the process which is really helpful. The image, though, doesn't add any SEO benefit. For example,someone looking for the site might type in Google "WMEMS fundraiser" or something similar.
I would therefore as a minimum change the opening like "It's simple! In just a few steps, you can..." to real text and include the word fundraiser or other words you think others might type.
I love that graphic - simple to understand. Honestly, SEO doesn't seem like a huge issue to me. While you might have someone forget the URL to order, it isn't a cause/site where you are looking to reach a widespread audience. Most of the kids going on the trip will share the link on FB and with friends/family to help them pay for their portion of the trip.
Changing the graphic to real text for SEO benefits SHOULD be on your main site if you use a similar image.
I might use that graphic for inspiration to create something for my sites.